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GrousyGirl's avatar

Great job. The narrator is just so repulsive.

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The Verdant Butterfly's avatar

Oh my gosh, I hope so! 😂

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Alma Muminovic's avatar

Reminds me of a stalker whose imagination sustains him. Very nicely done! Also cool notebook! Haha

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Larry Shell's avatar

I like it even more the second time but creepy male obsession. ::shudders:: The line I find the most jarring is about carving her smile wider. Very good.

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Wendy Cockcroft's avatar

Gorgeous and creepy

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