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Maryellen Brady 💗📚's avatar

Oh my stars, this is awesome. I love this. The investigation structure, the details, this is brilliant. 💗🙌💗

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The Verdant Butterfly's avatar

Something I've been playing around with for another project. I'm glad it came across fun and not disjointed and choppy.

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Maryellen Brady 💗📚's avatar

Oh this is brilliant. Pour some energy into this, it is good. I know id love to see where you take it. The entire concept is amazing. A new world, of thinking of cryptids.

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Liz Zimmers's avatar

I love a good cryptid tale, and this one does not disappoint! I would def watch this if it were a movie.

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Bradley Ramsey's avatar

Huzzah! This was SUPERB! I love how you established such thick atmosphere while also moving quickly through each of the investigation elements. The variety and uncertainty had me on the edge of my seat the entire time.

I would watch/read a full series on this in a heartbeat. I love this kind of stuff!

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Apis Dea's avatar

Great story

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Wendy Cockcroft's avatar

Oh, the writing! "...a dying town clinging to the Appalachians like a secret no one wanted to tell." Beautiful. Excellent. I love this so much!

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GrousyGirl's avatar

So fun! I like the various snippets of info we get, and still it is all so mysterious, too.

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