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Bradley Ramsey's avatar

Wow, I am speechless! This was absolutely incredible! The descriptions throughout the story were so amazing. From the scream that was "wet and final," to the line "they were made to fight, you were made to end things," I mean this story was insanely well-written!

This entire concept has my mind racing with ideas for the upcoming D'veen series I'm writing. I absolutely love that you took a dark fantasy spin here, and the sci-fi elements are positively gruesome and chilling. I am completely blown away. This was amazing.

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Maryellen Brady 💗📚's avatar

Wow, this is so intense I could feel & taste it all at once. Your attention to detail & flow of her discovery is * chefs kiss!

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